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@@ -67,17 +67,19 @@ rights*?  Obviously, they are, and they do, but in a world where
 microblogging discourse is the primary form of media ingestion, the consumer
 is manipulated with fight-or-flight challenges to make their own
 280-character thought piece on the discourse of the day, which leads them
-to consider the possibility that *perhaps* Chudlord18 might be on to something
+to consider the possibility that *perhaps* Chudlord18 *might* be on to something
 when he points out that George Soros was seen at the last Bilderberg
-meeting, even though all of the contents of Chudlord18's post was fake news.
+meeting, entirely ignoring the part where Chudlord18's post was
+disinformation.
 
 Sadly, as we see in the world today, it turns out that fascism is the
 most optimized ideology available given the limited cognitive bandwidth
 constraints of a 280-character post.  This is because the answer is always
 simple with fascism: generally a death threat towards the marginalized group
 of the day will do just fine, which easily fits into 280 characters:
-"Storm the capitol building!"?  Yep, even congressional members can be
-marginalized under the right circumstances, *and* it's under 280 characters.
+*"Storm the capitol building!"*?  *"Hang Mike Pence!"*?
+Yep, even congressional members and vice presidents can be marginalized
+under the right circumstances, *and* it's under 280 characters.
 
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