diff --git a/app/assets/javascripts/components/features/ui/components/onboarding_modal.jsx b/app/assets/javascripts/components/features/ui/components/onboarding_modal.jsx
index e5c395119f6..36e0d0c8ada 100644
--- a/app/assets/javascripts/components/features/ui/components/onboarding_modal.jsx
+++ b/app/assets/javascripts/components/features/ui/components/onboarding_modal.jsx
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ const PageOne = ({ acct, domain }) => (
 
     <div>
       <h1><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_one.welcome' defaultMessage='Welcome to Mastodon!' /></h1>
-      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_one.federation' defaultMessage='Mastodon is a social network that belongs to everyone.' /></p>
-      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_one.handle' defaultMessage='You are on {domain}, one of many independent Mastodon instances. Your full handle is {handle}' values={{ domain, handle: <strong>{acct}@{domain}</strong> }}/></p>
+      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_one.federation' defaultMessage='Mastodon is a network of independent servers joining up to make one larger social network. We call these servers: <em>Instances</em>' /></p>
+      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_one.handle' defaultMessage='You are on {domain}, so your full handle is {handle}' values={{ domain, handle: <strong>{acct}@{domain}</strong> }}/></p>
     </div>
   </div>
 );
@@ -39,6 +39,9 @@ PageOne.propTypes = {
 const PageTwo = () => (
   <div className='onboarding-modal__page onboarding-modal__page-two'>
     <div className='figure non-interactive'>
+       <div className='pseudo-drawer'>
+        <NavigationBar account={me} />
+        </div>
       <ComposeForm
         text='Awoo! #introductions'
         suggestions={Immutable.List()}
@@ -91,26 +94,26 @@ const PageFour = ({ domain, intl }) => (
       <div className='row'>
         <div>
           <div className='figure non-interactive'><ColumnHeader icon='home' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.home_title)} /></div>
-          <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_four.home' defaultMessage='Home timeline shows posts from people you follow'/></p>
+          <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_four.home' defaultMessage='The home timeline shows posts from people you follow.'/></p>
         </div>
 
         <div>
           <div className='figure non-interactive'><ColumnHeader icon='bell' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.notifications_title)} /></div>
-          <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_four.notifications' defaultMessage='Notifications show when someone interacts with you' /></p>
+          <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_four.notifications' defaultMessage='The notifications column shows when someone interacts with you.' /></p>
         </div>
       </div>
 
       <div className='row'>
         <div>
-          <div className='figure non-interactive' style={{ marginBottom: 0 }}><ColumnHeader icon='globe' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.federated_title)} /></div>
+          <div className='figure non-interactive' style={{ marginBottom: 0 }}><ColumnHeader icon='users' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.local_title)} /></div>
         </div>
 
         <div>
-          <div className='figure non-interactive' style={{ marginBottom: 0 }}><ColumnHeader icon='users' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.local_title)} /></div>
+          <div className='figure non-interactive' style={{ marginBottom: 0 }}><ColumnHeader icon='globe' type={intl.formatMessage(messages.federated_title)} /></div>
         </div>
       </div>
 
-      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_five.public_timelines' defaultMessage='Federated timeline lists public posts from everyone who people on {domain} follow. Local timeline is the same, but limited to people on {domain}.' values={{ domain }} /></p>
+      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_five.public_timelines' defaultMessage='The local timeline shows public posts from everyone on {domain}. The federated timeline shows public posts from everyone who people on {domain} follow. These are the Public Timelines, a great way to discover new people.' values={{ domain }} /></p>
     </div>
   </div>
 );
@@ -128,7 +131,7 @@ const PageSix = ({ admin }) => {
       <p>
         <FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.admin' defaultMessage="Your instance's admin is {admin}." values={{ admin: <Permalink href={admin.get('url')} to={`/accounts/${admin.get('id')}`}>@{admin.get('acct')}</Permalink> }} />
         <br />
-        <FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.read_guidelines' defaultMessage='Please, do not forget to read the {guidelines}!' values={{ guidelines: <a href='/about/more' target='_blank'><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.guidelines' defaultMessage='community guidelines' /></a> }}/>
+        <FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.read_guidelines' defaultMessage="Please read {domain}'s {guidelines}!" values={{domain, guidelines: <a href='/about/more' target='_blank'><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.guidelines' defaultMessage='community guidelines' /></a> }}/>
       </p>
     );
   }
@@ -138,7 +141,8 @@ const PageSix = ({ admin }) => {
       <h1><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.almost_done' defaultMessage='Almost done...' /></h1>
       {adminSection}
       <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.github' defaultMessage='Mastodon is free open-source software. You can report bugs, request features, or contribute to the code on {github}.' values={{ github: <a href='https://github.com/tootsuite/mastodon' target='_blank' rel='noopener'>GitHub</a> }} /></p>
-      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.apps_available' defaultMessage='There are {apps} available for iOS, Android and other platforms. And now... Bon Appetoot!' values={{ apps: <a href='https://github.com/tootsuite/documentation/blob/master/Using-Mastodon/Apps.md' target='_blank' rel='noopener'><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.various_app' defaultMessage='various mobile apps' /></a> }} /></p>
+      <p><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.apps_available' defaultMessage='There are {apps} available for iOS, Android and other platforms.' values={{ apps: <a href='https://github.com/tootsuite/documentation/blob/master/Using-Mastodon/Apps.md' target='_blank' rel='noopener'><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.various_app' defaultMessage='mobile apps' /></a> }} /></p>
+      <p><em><FormattedMessage id='onboarding.page_six.appetoot' defaultMessage='Bon Appetoot!' /></em></p>
     </div>
   );
 };