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@@ -1283,9 +1283,9 @@ knew. So I prepared.
 I released [Libreboot 20230319](libreboot20230319.md), several hours before
 his talk, and I started an aggressive *countercoup*, whereby Libreboot was
 developed much more aggressively than ever before, to completely outcompete them
-in every way. It worked. What's more, I did the unthinkable: I get them to back
-down. That almost never happens, the FSF tends to be extremely dogmatic, too
-drunk on their own prestige, set in their ways.
+in every way. It worked. What's more, I did the unthinkable: I got them to back
+down. That almost never happens, as the FSF tends to be extremely dogmatic, too
+drunk on their own prestige; set in their ways.
 
 They initially hosted their project on the official sourcehut instance run by
 Drew Devault. I simply asked Drew to terminate their hosting. He complied. He