sex it up a bit

Signed-off-by: Leah Rowe <info@minifree.org>

site/news/canoegnu.md

@@ -2,6 +2,9 @@
 % Leah Rowe
 % 12 May 2024
 
+Introduction/context
+====================
+
 As many readers know, Libreboot abandoned the GNU FSDG policy in November 2022,
 instead opting for a [different policy](policy.md) allowing blobs only under
 the most limited circumstances, to allow newer machines to be supported from
@@ -16,11 +19,20 @@ project much like the old one. Libreboot used to be entirely blob-free; coreboot
 is otherwise free software, but requires blobs on some mainboards, so Libreboot
 previously could not support all mainboards from Coreboot.
 
+Canoeboot: the blob-free fork
+=============================
+
 I've been maintaining my own fork of Libreboot since October 2023, called
-Canoeboot. See:
+Canoeboot. While it may have fewer supported mainboards than Libreboot as a
+result, it complies fully with the GNU Free System Distribution Guidelines,
+in providing an entirely de-blobbed coreboot distro, like Libreboot used to
+be. See:
 
 <https://canoeboot.org/>
 
+Email sent to GNU Eval
+====================
+
 With the recent Canoeboot 20240510 release, I've decided: Canoeboot should
 become a GNU project.
 
@@ -32,7 +44,12 @@ That email is published here (replies will not be published):
 
 <https://canoeboot.org/news/gnu.html>
 
-In it, I make a strong case in support of membership, and I encourage members
+In it, I make a strong case in support of membership.
+
+Share your opinion!
+===================
+
+I encourage members
 of the public to also voice their opinions about this topic. Therefore, I have
 publicised this link in several places:
 
@@ -49,6 +66,9 @@ ground for many debates within the FSF community):
 
 Discussion welcome!
 
+Final thoughts
+==============
+
 I'm taking a very much hands-off approach with this; I've sent the initial
 email and asked the public what they think, so it's up to them to say what
 they think.