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@@ -574,9 +574,9 @@ April 2016; I was quite preoccupied with many other things during that month,
 and I only *noticed* RMS's acceptance email on the 18th of April in that year.
 He just sent the email on a whim, and Libreboot had become part of GNU, just
 like that - even in the days after the 14th, but before 18th, I had been
-thinking about all the changed Mike Gerwitz wanted me to make first, that had
-even been communicated with me during that time, only for RMS to sidestep all
-of it and accept Libreboot early.
+thinking about the changes that Mike Gerwitz wanted me to make first, which had
+even been discussed during that time, only for RMS to sidestep all of it and
+accept Libreboot early; yet another example of the power that he held.
 
 Needless to say, I was stunned. And now, I will write about Libreboot's
 subsequent exit from the GNU project: