From 9795f8d3c912f7122dccb3ffed971c47ad015521 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leah Rowe Date: Wed, 10 Jan 2024 17:51:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] more grammar Signed-off-by: Leah Rowe --- site/docs/hardware/hp820g2.md | 2 +- site/news/hp820g2.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/site/docs/hardware/hp820g2.md b/site/docs/hardware/hp820g2.md index 9409be5..096da67 100644 --- a/site/docs/hardware/hp820g2.md +++ b/site/docs/hardware/hp820g2.md @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Introduction source](../build/), or use a release newer than 20231106.** This is a beastly 12.5" Broadwell machine from HP, the main benefit of which is -highly power-efficient (compared to Ivybridge and Haswell platforms), while +greater power efficiency (compared to Ivybridge and Haswell platforms), while offering similar CPU performance but much higher graphics performance. Variants exist with either Intel Core i5-5200U, i5-5300U, i7-5500U or diff --git a/site/news/hp820g2.md b/site/news/hp820g2.md index e3ecdb0..9d8515a 100644 --- a/site/news/hp820g2.md +++ b/site/news/hp820g2.md @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Introduction ============ This is a beastly 12.5" Broadwell machine from HP, the main benefit of which is -highly power-efficient (compared to Ivybridge and Haswell platforms), while +greater power efficiency (compared to Ivybridge and Haswell platforms), while offering similar CPU performance but much higher graphics performance. Variants exist with either Intel Core i5-5200U, i5-5300U, i7-5500U or